- The addition of two new outlines, the Pre-Transition Outline (PTO) and the Transition Outline (TO), as possible steps between the Single-Paragraph Outline (SPO) and the Multiple-Paragraph Outline (MPO).
- The introduction of transitions as sentence activities.
- Changes in the sequence of sentence activities.
- More illustrations of all strategies.
- Questions for book discussion groups.
- An expanded discussion of assessment.